What I saw in the Studio by Jonathan Cox

 

What I saw in the studio. 

The singers and rappers put their time and heart into each song and thought it through. The rappers and singers wrote down their lyrics and had to think of a new ways to write each song. When they rap and sing they did not show fear or being shy at all. They were loud and proud for the whole song even when they sang or rapped in front of people. They never showed being nervous or afraid. I was impressed by their persistence. They went back into their songs and fixed the mistakes that they made in the song and never gave up on it at all.  They showed that they don't care what others think about their music. I loved how they just took in all good feedback on their songs and just kept doing what they love. They don’t let their age stop them from doing good things for themselves and other people lives with their music. 

I feel astonished that kids and teens wrote about deep things people don’t talk about. Most kids and teens my age just mess around. The kids and teens here are trying to make people see things that they don’t talk about . For example, one student wrote about ADHD how hard ADHD is to deal with for some people.